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  • Day 17 Prompt from Jeff Griffin through the Found Poetry Review

    The prompt from Jeff Griffin took me to the 2015 Griffin Poetry Prize Anthology. As suggested, I read it through and transcribed chronologically and without punctuation what words or phrases I found “remarkable.” I then copied the text into Google Translate through a cycle of 5 different languages and then back to English. I’m afraid the chronology and substance of what I first noted remained more or less in tact in spite of Jeff’s prediction of translations going awry. Perhaps I was inept at the process. Would not be the first time. The poem below uses unaltered words and phrases which keep faith with the order in which I noted them originally.

    Misspent

    How the feminine gains strength
    smelling of silence, prayers wearing out,
    old thoughts—unbroken, never corralled.

    To keep us from home, now I expose
    the ironed life in ‘glorious’ childhood
    which did not heal with time.

    Nothing passed between us
    but, under this wing, hard love,
    possibility, memorable patience.

  • Day 16 Prompt from NaPoWriMo.net — choosing words from a specialized dictionary

    Instead of the April 16 prompt from The Found Poetry Review, which may have provided a constellation of possibilities to others but left me cold, I followed, instead, the optional prompt for April 17 from NaPoWriMo.net, which both intrigued and amused.

    Here’s the prompt: “Use ten words from a specialized dictionary in a poem.” The source I consulted: “Foyles Philavery,” by Christopher Foyle, 2007. (The 10 words appear in bold.)

    Hunting season

    Sophomania sufferer, I hear
    your insufferable banter in the name of venery:
    Your lust for a fitchew’s fur, mellisonant to your ears,
    your craving for inchpin, sweet as the sorbite you seek
    to drain from a breathing creature you dissavage
    with death by pheon and crossbow.

    It’s otiose for me to argue, I know.
    As the black vulture circles free above us,
    I turn remontado and disappear.

     

  • Day 15 Found Poetry Review Prompt from Joel Katelnikoff: Love what you hate

    Joel Katelnikoff’s prompt took me to the reading list my book group set for 2015-2016 over my own objections to a sole focus on fiction and non-fiction related to Canada’s aboriginal or indigenous peoples. I felt the weight of the choices but read the books, on occasion with gritted teeth. What follows, then, is my take from those sources on finding “love within what we hate,”  which to be honest surprised me.

    In this partially found poem, I’ve used the actual titles of books, exhibits and reports that I’ve experienced. They appear in italics, and I can supply footnotes, as necessary.

    Manifesto

    The World Until Yesterday before I learned to read
    was a child’s playroom filled with toys and possibility
    under skies, cloud-free.

    The World Until Yesterday before I chose to read
    about Riel and Dumont, A life of Revolution,
    residential schools, Indigenous Healing,
    was a simpler place, where conscience slept
    in comfort, largely undisturbed

    until the day a little Birdie sang Celia’s Song to me,
    to expose the present day’s ugly past,
    to show Truth and Reconciliation as necessities.

    Walking with our sisters, I inched down
    a corridor of moccasins, beaded or plain,
    each one for a woman missing or murdered
    because she was The Inconvenient Indian,
    or from the Métis Nation: Hiding in Plain Sight.
    So easy to overlook, to forget till now

    failed governance, broken promises,
    abuse, and deprivation, which make
    The Comeback of indigenous peoples
    a triumph of will, talent, patience
    over settler greed and duplicity.

    Never thought of myself as a colonizer before.
    Never assumed my share of the shame for
    the suicides, attempted or successful,
    of Extraordinary Canadians,
    though they might not self-identify as such.
    Extraordinary because they were here first.

    Time now
    to embrace justice,
    to listen,
    finally to learn
    we can’t be white tourists
    in an indigenous land.

    Now The Reason We Walk
    toward An inconvenient truth
    is that at long last we begin to see our future
    as one to share.

  • Day 14: Prompt from Brian Oliu Re: The Found Poetry Review Challenge

    Brian Oliu suggested setting aside “about twenty minutes of your day with the intention of “doing research” for a piece. Do not allow yourself to write about anything that you do not experience firsthand….Allow yourself to be immersed in your project & only trust “first hand research” take notes, but don’t let the notes dictate your experience. After you have concluded your “research” begin writing immediately & without prejudice–don’t stop, don’t worry about linebreaks or punctuation, or word choice:capture whatever fleeting magic you have conjured until the feeling is gone.”
    Well, it’s not ‘magic’ that characterized the firsthand experience captured in the piece, below. Again, a day late.

    Cliché Ritual

    Papers come out of my ears. More than I imagined all over the carpet. Raked charge card slips, bills, receipts, form into neat, little heaps just days before the deadline! Still cross- referencing, double-checking, collating, misplacing what I’ve just seen, I have to dig for it. Rather be doing anything else, except visiting the dentist. I pay my accountant through the nose to submit my return. A relief, frankly. Though I wish I could give him the piles as they are, let him work his magic in that high glass palace. Though I’d have to pay double, which would piss me off. Instead, I struggle to hold onto the string from where the story of each category begins before the whole darn shebang unravels, and I have to start from scratch. En route, I slice fingertips on sharp sheets and bleed, and then I mis-staple till I figure out a stack’s too thick and use a clip instead. That’s expensive, too: I use coloured ones, ‘cause ‘silver’ clips stick like rust, make me cringe as if I had chalk on my hands. Only then do I assemble the still-fluttering papers and stuff them into a giant envelope with a blank cheque, dated April, owing.

  • Day 13: Prompt from the Found Poetry Review

    The April 13 prompt from Senna Yee had a light-hearted side: “Travel websites have always intrigued me with their language– visual, lush and sometimes a bit dramatic and naive. Browse and write down any words/phrases that interest you….Craft a poem using only these words/phrases. You may arrange them in any way you wish.”

    Of course, a variation appealed more than the strict letter of the prompt. What follows is a poem drawn from words and phrases found in the winter 2016 magazine of the Canadian Automobile Association. Each found word or phrase is non-contiguous and so appears on separate lines.

    Milestone

    I had a mission
    to feed
    the fantasy,
    explore
    trails that lead to
    hard-to-find,
    forehead-slapping
    experience;

    to cross the river,
    embrace
    hours of daylight,
    diamond-quilted
    thermal
    danger,
    caught by sunlight.

    Don’t panic!
    You’re like me,
    driven,
    hoping for
    biodiverse
    quirkiness,
    tango lessons,
    ruins,
    bazaars,
    almost any kind of trinket,
    cheese and chocolate.

    Take the two.
    Life happens,
    pays tributes to the gods
    I’m craving.