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  • Day 14: Prompt from Brian Oliu Re: The Found Poetry Review Challenge

    Brian Oliu suggested setting aside “about twenty minutes of your day with the intention of “doing research” for a piece. Do not allow yourself to write about anything that you do not experience firsthand….Allow yourself to be immersed in your project & only trust “first hand research” take notes, but don’t let the notes dictate your experience. After you have concluded your “research” begin writing immediately & without prejudice–don’t stop, don’t worry about linebreaks or punctuation, or word choice:capture whatever fleeting magic you have conjured until the feeling is gone.”
    Well, it’s not ‘magic’ that characterized the firsthand experience captured in the piece, below. Again, a day late.

    Cliché Ritual

    Papers come out of my ears. More than I imagined all over the carpet. Raked charge card slips, bills, receipts, form into neat, little heaps just days before the deadline! Still cross- referencing, double-checking, collating, misplacing what I’ve just seen, I have to dig for it. Rather be doing anything else, except visiting the dentist. I pay my accountant through the nose to submit my return. A relief, frankly. Though I wish I could give him the piles as they are, let him work his magic in that high glass palace. Though I’d have to pay double, which would piss me off. Instead, I struggle to hold onto the string from where the story of each category begins before the whole darn shebang unravels, and I have to start from scratch. En route, I slice fingertips on sharp sheets and bleed, and then I mis-staple till I figure out a stack’s too thick and use a clip instead. That’s expensive, too: I use coloured ones, ‘cause ‘silver’ clips stick like rust, make me cringe as if I had chalk on my hands. Only then do I assemble the still-fluttering papers and stuff them into a giant envelope with a blank cheque, dated April, owing.

  • Day 13: Prompt from the Found Poetry Review

    The April 13 prompt from Senna Yee had a light-hearted side: “Travel websites have always intrigued me with their language– visual, lush and sometimes a bit dramatic and naive. Browse and write down any words/phrases that interest you….Craft a poem using only these words/phrases. You may arrange them in any way you wish.”

    Of course, a variation appealed more than the strict letter of the prompt. What follows is a poem drawn from words and phrases found in the winter 2016 magazine of the Canadian Automobile Association. Each found word or phrase is non-contiguous and so appears on separate lines.

    Milestone

    I had a mission
    to feed
    the fantasy,
    explore
    trails that lead to
    hard-to-find,
    forehead-slapping
    experience;

    to cross the river,
    embrace
    hours of daylight,
    diamond-quilted
    thermal
    danger,
    caught by sunlight.

    Don’t panic!
    You’re like me,
    driven,
    hoping for
    biodiverse
    quirkiness,
    tango lessons,
    ruins,
    bazaars,
    almost any kind of trinket,
    cheese and chocolate.

    Take the two.
    Life happens,
    pays tributes to the gods
    I’m craving.

  • Day 12 Impromptu poem through the Found Poetry Review

    Oh dear. Another day late. Well, can’t be helped. Here is the prompt from Robert Fitterman, borrowed from Steve Zuttanski: “Collect found language from individuals who articulate how they feel, specifically, in their bodies…physical symptoms in the body (neck, head, stomach, feet, etc). Use at least 20 different posts from different speakers. Modify, arrange, modify.” Which I modified, as you will see below.

    I have no fuse

    How do you cope with fear
    You get used to it

    I don’t get thrown by it
    don’t sound like an idiot saying
    I was invisible when I was underneath
    massive rifts
    some minor slippage

    Trying to go out every day
    hearing voices
    troubles
    being good to others
    just didn’t work out

    Honestly
    I suffered a lot of nostalgia

    People who do not believe
    shouldn’t be surprised
    it’s a workout

    To cry or think of something sad for a while
    really takes off and catches

     

    (Phrases or words (and the title) which constitute within a single line are non-contiguous and taken from about 20 different articles or reports from different sources in the April 9 paper edition of The Toronto Star. )

     

  • Day 10: Catch up impromptu poem

    Instead of taking the cue from the Found Poetry Review for April 10, turned to NaPoWriMo.net and the lead from Lillian Hallberg’s challenge: ” to write a “book spine” poem. This involves taking a look at your bookshelves, and writing down titles in order (or rearranging the titles) to create a poem…. that is seeded throughout with your own lines, interjections, and thoughts.  Here’s what emerged:

    Behind the second shelf

    After the falls galore
    and running with scissors
    she broke into the school of essential ingredients
    to ‘edit’ the accidental indies,
    those festival films
    awaiting her cuts, her fearful
    symmetry about the big why
    for her virgin cure

     

    Key:  “After the falls,” Catherine Gildiner
    “Galore,” Michael Crummy
    “Running with Scissors,” Augusten Burroughs
    “The School of Essential Ingredients,” Erica Bauermeister
    “The Accidental Indies,” Robert Finley
    “Her Fearful Symmetry,” Audrey Niffenegger
    “The Big Why,” Michael Winter
    “Virgin Cure,” Amy McKay

  • April 11: impromptu poem from another prompt

    Fell off the wagon yesterday (April 10) and didn’t write a poem in response to Found Poetry Review’s prompt. Perhaps will have a chance to catch up later today. Perhaps not.

    Didn’t really feel any affinity for today’s prompt from that source which had to do with astrological signs and other stuff. Instead, attempted a response to this Day 11 optional prompt from NaPoWriMo.net: “…write a poem in which you closely describe an object or place, and then end with a much more abstract line that doesn’t seemingly have anything to do with that object or place, but which, of course, really does….An abstract, philosophical kind of statement closing out a poem that is otherwise intensely focused on physical, sensory details.”

     Waiting for the axe

    She’s like a tree—all bark, no sap
    inner rings wrung out

    pre-leaf, as if leaves could limp out of buds
    discouraged by April frosts

    Winds sigh through her branches
    arthritic, sore, stiff limbs
    outstretched toward a pale sun in a pale sky

    till, in the notch of a heavy bough
    a robin lands, strands of grasses in his beak

    Back-and-forth he flies
    all day and the following day, too

    to form a nest at shoulder-height
    A messy pile takes shape
    Hope flows to her roots

    underwater, without Noah